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She looked on you and you looked up
Your ice could eyes cut right trough her
Be strong, don't fall, You need to stand on your own feet as your mother always learnd you
Do you remeber what you told her that day
That You only felt joy when she was around
That she made you smile
That you would catch her if she fell
You would catch me
You left her alone while you where walking to the girl next door, like you did with me once
Now she's starring at her own reflection, it's not her
She's distroyde and the joy is gone
Wasn't she good enough, for you
What was she doing wrong?
Why didn't you catch her when she fell
As you promised her that day
Her mother always told her not to lose herself in love
You need to find out from the maze she said
And never let a boy bring a girl down
Even if her mother learned her that
she's still pretend to be okay when she's crying all alone
Because of a boy who didn't catch her
Wasn't she good enough, for you
What was she doing wrong?
Why didn't you catch her when she fell
As you promised her that day
So, please
can you just..
Why didn't you catch me that day?
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