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2016-04-13 15:27 #0 av: [TessHarmer]


She looked on you and you looked up

Your ice could eyes cut right trough her

Be strong, don't fall, You need to stand on your own feet as your mother always learnd you

Do you remeber what you told her that day

That You only felt joy when she was around

That she made you smile

That you would catch her if she fell

You would catch me

You left her alone while you where walking to the girl next door, like you did with me once

Now she's starring at her own reflection, it's not her

She's distroyde and the joy is gone

Wasn't she good enough, for you

What was she doing wrong?

Why didn't you catch her when she fell

As you promised her that day

Her mother always told her not to lose herself in love

You need to find out from the maze she said

And never let a boy bring a girl down

Even if her mother learned her that

she's still pretend to be okay when she's crying all alone

Because of a boy who didn't catch her

Wasn't she good enough, for you

What was she doing wrong?

Why didn't you catch her when she fell

As you promised her that day

So, please

can you just..

Why didn't you catch me that day?

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2017-02-14 14:41 #1 av: AnnikaBrandt

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